After the critique I deleted the scene that was jerky, I initially replaced it with the scene I cut from my movie before, however it just felt shoved in so i kept it without the deleted scene.
Part of movie that i liked but had to edit out because i thought the moving through model scene highlighted the red light more and was more interesting.
I decided that I preferred using the sunlight to create shadows rather than lights
I also made another Particle box thing which circles around and also releases particles more steadily, but still with a randomness in size and rotation.
Also added a little bit of colour to model through particles and made a red light with the one that circles around.
Views of model (reminds me of a chrysanthemum or dahlia)
Put it into cryengine and repeated and flipped it etc.
Views of model
Video of sunlight effects on model
Video of movement
I had an issue where animating my object cause it to lag, I did not have this issue while rotating in my speed run. I suspect that it lags because of all the components (each curved "petal" is a component).